1. The strong parts of the essay was how detailed the descriptions of the events were because they kept the story from being boring.
2. The only improvement could be the use of some dialogue.
3. The use of metaphors
4. The description of the events right after he broke his arm.

1. My narrative invites readers by giving information about myself that is relevant to the story.
2. I related events in sequence by giving detail before every major event.
3. I gave detailed descriptions of people places and things by giving details that were relevant to the story.
4. Toward  the end of my narrative there is a huge contrast in plot were the story elevates it to a more intense level.
5. My narrative it written from my point of view.
6. My narrative doesn't really connection between past events, people, or places and the present, that is defiantly some thing i need to add.
7. Everything in my story points to one main idea, at the beginning things that seem pointless come back at the end to have great importance.

Helen Keller Narrative

1. What did you think of this narrative?
I enjoyed it because it showed the struggle that she had learning such basic things that we take for granted.
2. What was most interesting or engaging about it?
The way that her teacher taught helen words.
3. What surprised you?
It suprised me that helen was able to learn so fast.
4. Did this change your outlook on Helen Keller at all? Why or why not?
Not realy because i already knew a lot about her.
5. Copy and paste three examples of vivid detail and imagery that helped enhance the story
                 1 "tangible white darkness shut you in, and the great ship, tense and anxious, groped her way toward the shore with plummet and sounding-line, and you waited with beating heart for something to happen?"
                 2 "sun penetrated the mass of honeysuckle that covered the porch, and fell on my upturned face. "
                 3 "That living word awakened my soul, gave it light, hope, joy, set it free! There were barriers still, it is true, but barriers that could in time be swept away."
6. How can a narrative be more engaging than something like a biography? Why is it important to get someone's personal perspective?
A narrative gives the opinions of the person which alows you to feel what the person was feeling in the story.
7. Make a bulltted lists of some things you could write a narrative about
-skiing
-friends
-sports
-family storys

I Am From Poem

I am from small towns

but big adventures

I am from time outdoors

and crystal lake shores

Camping at Deer Creek with my family

cold nights in small tents

but warn fires to wake up to

fire made breakfast to start the day

give us energy to swim in the bay

I am from cold white ski slopes

slicing through snow with professional hopes

cold days riding on the hills

sipping hot chocolate to banish the chills

I from long airplane rides

sleeping and dreaming of Califrnia tides 

spending all day on the beaches

and spending all night in citys.

Survey swaqq

1 yes
2 jokes
short story
3
comic strip
songs
internet news
4
test i hate them their nish nish
5 d
6 i love to discuss things
7 contribute
8 surf reddit and i work at target
9 i went sking and went on reddit
10 N/A
11