1. My narrative invites readers by giving information about myself that is relevant to the story.
2. I related events in sequence by giving detail before every major event.
3. I gave detailed descriptions of people places and things by giving details that were relevant to the story.
4. Toward  the end of my narrative there is a huge contrast in plot were the story elevates it to a more intense level.
5. My narrative it written from my point of view.
6. My narrative doesn't really connection between past events, people, or places and the present, that is defiantly some thing i need to add.
7. Everything in my story points to one main idea, at the beginning things that seem pointless come back at the end to have great importance.