I am from small towns
but big adventures
I am from time outdoors
and crystal lake shores
Camping at Deer Creek with my family
cold nights in small tents
but warn fires to wake up to
fire made breakfast to start the day
give us energy to swim in the bay
I am from cold white ski slopes
slicing through snow with professional hopes
cold days riding on the hills
sipping hot chocolate to banish the chills
I from long airplane rides
sleeping and dreaming of Califrnia tides
spending all day on the beaches
and spending all night in citys.
Some good moments captured here! You did a really nice job using free verse but then throwing in some rhymes (doors/shore, day/bay, slopes/hopes, etc). I'd really love to see some MORE about you in here, a few more stanzas to detail you further
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